Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
Shop deviantART for the
holidays and save BIG!
Click here! :holly:
[x]

deviantART

:flirty:
 
About Me Member Shadow Deviant teop22/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 8 Years
Needs Premium Membership
Statistics 41 Deviations
345 Comments
5,085 Pageviews

Newest

Favourites

random excerpts from my novel

Thu Apr 17, 2003, 8:59 PM

On the steps in Union Sq, decorated with New York's finest ( although he wondered how many were actually natives). A cell phone taxi cab choir sang to rainbows of conversation convering in his ears. A dog with her jaw tied eyed him, her owner holding her back. The sun finally cracked through the melting wall of winter and sweaters could come off. Being around so many people made even a misanthrope come alive.

deviantID

No deviantID yet.

Devious Info

  • Current Residence: San Diego
  • Interests: living life through a protagonist
  • Favourite movie: gattaca/bottle rckt/lwrnc arabia/amelie
  • Favourite band or musician: jeff buckley/wilco/notwist/hooverphonic
  • Favourite genre of music: postmodern
  • Favourite poet or writer: Hemngway/Pushkin/Lermontov/Byron/Pelevin
  • Operating System: scalpel
  • Shell of choice: solitude
  • Wallpaper of choice: broken glass
  • Skin of choice: thick
  • Favourite gaming platform: slippery
  • Personal Quote: love fades/lust waits
  • Tools of the Trade: emaciation of the heart

deviantART Community Board

[x]

Comments


Flagged as Spam
:icongyroscope:
teop is poet backwards !

--
JoshTierney.com
:iconscarrow:
Thanks kindly for the comment. :) (Smile)

And yes, it's true. Although, thankfully, I got over the fact many years ago that my verse is never likely to have any sort of universal appeal.
That does free one from certain encumberances though eh?
:icondreamheaven:
Am I like the only person who ever visits you????? FFS I know ya all out there can see this! COMMENT ON HIS STUFF ffs!!!!

:D (Big Grin)

okies.. thats my public service for today :) (Smile) How are youuuuuuu hon??? Hope everything is well, hopefully I'll get a chance to talk to you soon!

Hug Love
:icondreamheaven:
You know what I can't figure out...

all those people watching you and no comments....

meh.. oh well..

HELLO!!!!!!!!! Just checkin in to see how you are n stuff Hug

Here's a kiss for you, my love!
:iconareincarnation:
ah, so many people recognising sceptical's style... as hard as I try, i can't seem to shed infamy.

well, as for the dogmatist error...

the poem was inspired while speaking to a dear friend of mine (my town is a cultural void, and soccer, boxing and fighting are the only topics one can really fall into, so the odd philosophical conversation is na god send) Andy, argued how we can never embrace abstract concepts, one can not know "what is in itself" as it is a shimmerer, a man-made dream to keep us on our feet.

his argument was quite nietzschean, so i tied it into nietzsche's phrase of dogmatic and cognitivist philosophy: the "dogmatist's error"

so, the shadows represent say, Platonic forms. we know of the concept of such abstractions, but what lies beneath them we can not. So, the shadows cling to us, and force our imagination and philosophy... but in reality they taunt us, for man can never know such things.

the last stanza (if i remember correctly) brings in Plato, and blames him, the father of the dogmatist error.

nothing really original about the poem, but it was written purposefully in an abstract and aphoristic manner to connect it with the theme.

as is known, it isn't my perspective.. though sceptical, i am too spiritual, and feel reality can be found in a true sense.

any way... i'm tired, and i hope this made some sense. i'm always happy to talk philosophy, so if you'd like, i'm up for discussion

daniel

--
many cry for the dolphin, trapped in fishing nets.

but who cries for the tuna?
:icontmpst24myst:
Reading the comments left by yourself on my work helps me feel as though as I'm on my way to accomplishing something with my writing. You always have something indepth to say, whether it be a critique or personal opinion. I have come to respect anything you have to say or offer me as a writer.

Thankyou.

Dae
Black Rose
:icongaston:
.
thanks for your comment on "ube ubi caritas".

peace.
+g

--
:community:
human rights for all
:iconwu-wei:

Thanks for the kind words. Your interpretation was fairly accurate, but the germination was a fairly random thought, and the dovetailing referred to a merging of things.

--
Another shameless artist
--
. . . and birth a new translation of a language yet untold.

Site Map